Open Poetry #5 |
The Rose |
Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
The Rose ----------------- I look inside my memories to the flowers of my past I see the emotions spent for love that did not last Like flowers wild and tame Their variety always there but like the weaken petal They fell in the gusty air The Rose was all I ever hoped So soft and firm and sweet I did not see the thorn it hid when I kissed it on the cheek It pricks me when I come to close but still I dare to touch Enchanted am I of its glow the Rose is just too much. James (Parker) Haley (Revised)Jan 14, 2000. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, James! Beauty does have its thorns, doesn't it! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thank you Denise, you comments are always so sweet. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Beautiful description of a woman, you do have a way with words James! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
James, What a wonderful poem so beautiful , beauty definatley has its thorns |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi James, Oh that rose and its thorn! Yet still the kiss on the cheek. Rus |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, women are all roses in my eyes.. ouch, ouch, gotta watch where I grab. Thanks whiskey, I will take the pain for just another breath of her scent. Thanks Rus, I really loved your poem, The Rose from the Hearth, its very lovely. Parker |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
The pleasure is always worth the pain, me thinks. Lovely poem, Haleyja. Michael |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thanks Michael, yes pain and pleasure is their a difference. I sometimes think not. Parker |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Parker- This is just LOVELY ! Within the beauty of the rose ... a thorny stem worth the close inspection. Ahhhhh ! Perfection ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thanks Marge, I think I'm drawn to thorny roses. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely James...I heard a quote one time that went something like this: Some people look at a rose and wonder why something so beautiful has thorns, others look and thank God that something like thorns grow flowers as beautiful as roses |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hoot, thank you very much. That quote is so true. Some might say that Love has a hidden danger, like the rose with its thorns, but maybe they are theere just to keep us on our toes. Parker |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I loved your verses, and the thoughts And I love roses Liz |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
I just love the irony here. Very well written and so meaningful. Life and Love ~ both are uncertain things. But what I really liked was the part about the "prick"...I think I've had that flower before, too. (hehehe) Sherry "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thanks Liz, your very kind. Sherry, now I'm not sure how to take your remark about the "prick". How many times have you had that flower before dare I ask. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful James, loved the way you compared the Rose to a Woman and I think beauty needs to protect itself, don't you think? Beautiful James I love it. Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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