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Tribute to Mother |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Mother Never before have I understood how much pain you took To give birth to a child, I had to take a closer look Never has your heart my soul forsaken Why did it took me so long to be awaken Never before did I know how much you really cared Never before did I know how much precious love you shared You carried me, …more than once You loved my wrinkled face In your heart, there was only grace You cared with endless love You wrapped that love around me like a glove You guided my first tread Provided a tender safety net You were there, whenever I started to chatter The ear that could hear just what was the matter My first works spoken made you cry Today I know the reason why You’ve taught me right from wrong Through your ways I now know where I went wrong When I said “Mom ” you were always there Always protective, always aware When I took ill, you were my nurse You didn’t need to take a vow, “For better or for worse.” So often I would have looked like a fool without your guidance throughout school Many times you took my broken heart Rebuild my trust with your gentle art You stitched my heart right back in place Your only reward, the smile on my face Through the years, you safely moved me like a pawn through chess Never before did I know, never before did I guess Yet you stood, proud, with a smile as I took my wife Retiring a roll, you’d done, all of my life Somehow it broke your heart, but even so You saw me wed, and let me go Your grandchild, your pride and joy Although, a girl and not like me, a boy You’ve loved her as if she was your own How could she know…? You soon be gone Never before have I understood how much pain you took To give birth to a child, I had to take a closer look Never before did I know how much you really cared Never before did I know how much precious love you shared Giving always all of you It was the only way you knew, never half but all of you Forty-five years have gone by Why didn’t I said more often “I love you”, …Why? You know I’ve not been one to cry Remember “Mom” the day I cried That was the day you died Goodbye The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She knows, Helmut, she knows. Beautiful tribute.< !signature--> Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-14-2000).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very, very beautiful, Helmut!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Helmut, This is a very moving tribute, so full of love, and that sense of guilt that goes with losing one you love.There are so many truths that you've written here. It is truly a lovely poem Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Mothers always know, Helmut. They also know that what they do is never fully appreciated until their children are grown and have children of their own. Beautiful, touching tribute to your Mom! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Sunshine Thank you. Yes you're right I looked and I found. It just took me.........to long. But I'm sure she knows, Mothers always do, don't they. Take care Sunshine suthern Thank you, that you liked it means a lot to me. Elizabeth There is always an empty space filled with a candle in my heart. If you know what I mean, I guess you do. Thank you. Denise Yes I now what that feels like...now. Why does it take that long? Thank you dear The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh, this is so very beautiful Helmut...a wonderful tribute to your Mother and to all mothers... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I read this through brimming eyes, Helmut. I have been both child and mother, and your portrayal of what a mother means to one's life is striking. You must understand...your mother knew, in her heart of hearts, your love, for she placed it there. This is by far one of the most sincere poems that I've had the pleasure to read here or anywhere. Thank you for sharing this with us.  Claire |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
There certainly is a unique bond with our mother that transcends all others... and you've expressed it beautifully here, Helmut.... Very, very nice indeed....  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helmut Becker, my friend. I've sent you an e-mail with an answer to this lovely tribute to your Mother. This is beautiful. Love ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Pepper Thank you so much and also for the comments on my page. Check your mail. Meadowmuse Mother's are so important in our lives and sometimes I think I overlooked a little bit what's most important. I 'm honored with your reply. Nan Thank you for your kind words. Marge.....Thank you I will check the mail. There is something special about you, perhaps you are a mother too. Love -Helmut |
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