Open Poetry #5 |
The Truth From Within |
earthspirit New Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 7 |
In my heart I am crying In my soul I am yearning In my mind I am trying In my life I am learning |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
As long as we keep learning...I enjoyed this. Welcome to Passions! |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Short but Sweet, and very Deep. I think your first little poem is neat. Earthman |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very nice. direct yet not. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is sweet Welcome to passions Good work !! |
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earthspirit New Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 7 |
Thank you all for your kind remarks. I'm so glad I found this forum. I've spent the last few hours reading so much talented writing. I look forward to reading much more and sharing mine with you. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Very much wisdom in this short lil number...Welcome to passions, I'll be watchin for ya! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! Short,sweet and full of wisdom! Welcome to Passions, Earthspirit! And check your email for a special welcome! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this! *S* Welcome to Passions! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Quiet thoughts over hot chocolate on a chilly night. At least that was how it struck me. Welcome to Passions, earthspirit. I look forward to more. --Kess You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
hi earthspirit, so brief and so much said. love it. just posted my first yesterday, such a welcome, such nice people here. rus |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we all are good write |
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