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earthspirit
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0 posted 2000-01-14 01:19 AM


In my heart
   I am crying
In my soul
   I am yearning
In my mind
   I am trying
In my life
   I am learning

© Copyright 2000 earthspirit - All Rights Reserved
tulip
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1 posted 2000-01-14 01:22 AM


As long as we keep learning...I enjoyed this.  Welcome to Passions!
Paul Hoekman
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2 posted 2000-01-14 01:41 AM


Short but Sweet,
and very Deep.
I think your
first little poem
is neat.

Earthman

spiked
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3 posted 2000-01-14 01:44 AM


Very nice.
direct yet not.

whiskey
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4 posted 2000-01-14 01:56 AM


This is sweet   Welcome to passions
Good work !!

earthspirit
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5 posted 2000-01-14 02:15 AM


Thank you all for your kind remarks.  I'm so glad I found this forum.  I've spent the last few hours reading so much talented writing.  I look forward to reading much more and sharing mine with you.  
devina
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Cali
6 posted 2000-01-14 02:29 AM


Very much wisdom in this short lil number...Welcome to passions, I'll be watchin for ya!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Denise
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7 posted 2000-01-14 11:49 AM


I agree! Short,sweet and full of wisdom! Welcome to Passions, Earthspirit! And check your email for a special welcome!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~



suthern
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8 posted 2000-01-14 11:56 AM


I like this! *S* Welcome to Passions!
Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap
9 posted 2000-01-14 02:12 PM


Quiet thoughts over hot chocolate on a chilly night.

At least that was how it struck me.  

Welcome to Passions, earthspirit.  I look forward to more.

--Kess


 You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.


Rus Bowden
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10 posted 2000-01-14 02:55 PM


hi earthspirit,

so brief and so much said.  love it.

just posted my first yesterday, such a welcome, such nice people here.

rus

passing shadows
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11 posted 2005-04-16 04:54 PM


we all are

good write

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