Open Poetry #5 |
Time to Time |
kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Watching the sunset the thunderstorm brewing Some feel it threatening or scary To me it is beautiful. In my mind the thunderstrom is earths way of unleashing all its anger Striking out at innocent victims. As do us humans do from time to time Watching the sunrise, the rainbows forming What a wonderful, unexpected feeling of warmth that the earth is giving us. As do us humans do from time to time Listening to the cries of anguish coming from the children who do not understand. Hearing the sweet sound of the singing bird Oh, how relaxing, understanding their peaceful moment As do us humans do from time to time The earth and its living relations which we question, from time to time, and the earths response it to wonder about us, from time to time. |
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earthspirit New Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 7 |
I like your point of view. I really enjoyed this one. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Hey again Kit Kat, I love this one! down to earth where we all should be all the time, unfortunately, the flesh requires too much for too many. Therefore most are foolishly content with time to time. Earthman |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice analogies, kikkat....... |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very nice, Kitkat! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
hi kitkat, your last stanza in this is terrific. good read! |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
I agree with you kitkat. Indeed nature does stew up some fine thunderstorms to reflect how we tend to react to circumstances around us. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Exellent, I love how you relate thunderstorms to the lashing out of the human spirit. Great work! *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
I love to watch the storms Great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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