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The Path
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The Path |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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The Path I hurt, I’m sad Angry and mad I feel out of control I want so much to see The one I love it burn’s my soul I travel down this path To get where I must go To reach the person I’ve Searched so long to find. To feel, to know. A love that has no boundaries, No limits, no lows. This love I’ve found opens me to who I am. It shows me how much my values mean to me. No lies just love, true love. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I surely hope you find it, spiked....  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well, I haven't found a love that perfect here on earth, but I sure do hope you come close!!!! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Nan and Denise. I wrote this for my girlfriend a couple of years ago. it was written in a few seconds without thought just moved the pencil on the paper and let it go as it wanted. Richard Rendall |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
Spiked, There may be love without boundaries and limits, but trust me, there is no love without lows. I'm old,I know! Thank you for sharing. P.S. You're right, love has no lies. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
As I have found out many times over the lows just make the highs that much higher Thanks |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Richard- It is beautifully written. And I like the way the 'pencil moved over the paper' that's good enough for me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
hi spiked, the greatest thing about this pem is that your feelings went down so honestly, and then you are still together after two years. what a story behind a poem! rus |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
It's definitely the honesty that makes this even more so a great poem than it originally would be. Wonderful work, keep it up. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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