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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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No retrocede The day to me just mute and bare, Within the confines of my stare. And though the sun smiles in gay, It seems to me a dreary day. She has left on a mercy grace, On a kindness to emplace. Yet It shrouds me in distress, Without an unction of repress. I can't suppress the wake of sorrow Or future launch of lonely morrow. Or feel without a twinge of quell, The lonely time that I must dwell. It aches me deep, her fly away, I would her here each precious day. She is my shoal my anchor pole. She is the other half my soul. Although a temporary deed, For time, there is no retrocede. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I can't believe that no one has seen this yet Sy, it's absolutely beautiful!!!! Of course I've always been a fan:  Back to the top with you dear!!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
It's quite hard to be alone in the nest, but you express it beautifully, as always. I wouldn't have missed this. You just posted it after my bedtime Love ya, Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Devina, I thank you much your elegant touch, Your helpful and your beautiful. And hope someday to do as much, For a doleful soul so graceful. *L* Sy Elizabeth, Thank you so much for the comment It has lift my soul in to assent. Love ya Sy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tho soulmate doth part, be not despaired for in her return, you will be paired again with your angel, your life may she forever and ever be your loving wife. Beautiful, as always. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
There is not much more to say although I have no sun that shines so gay More like a white and cloudy sky A well done poem.. and that is why You see me here down below hoping she's back soon and will never go But without she's gone away would your words find such nice array? I enjoyed the piece like a sunday drive Because, I also miss my wife Well done Sy, but whom I'm telling here  The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! If you didn't feel the pain of missing her you wouldn't have gifted us with this lovely poem! So sweet! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi Seymour, I was taken into this poem to the end as it told it woe so wonderfully. Such a moment. It aches me deep, her fly away, I would her here each precious day. She is my shoal my anchor pole. Rus |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Another wonderful one Sy , then all yours are |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Seymour, another beautiful one! Your wordplay baffles me at times! But that's the sign of a truly, intricate writer. Nathan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you so much. *L* Sy Helmut, Your welcome Helmut and thank you. Denise, So true and thank you. *L* Sy Rus, Nice comment, thank you. Whiskey, Thank you beautiful. Nate, Nice comment, thank you. |
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