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A good meal
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A good meal |
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Quiet Lightning Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56 |
Feel free to comment A good meal I know you had a hard day so just relax I know you are hungry but you can't eat snacks Come in my kitchen and have a seat I'll set the table and we'll begin to eat I prepared a dinner just for you I hope you like the things I do I cooked your favorite macaroni and cheese along with hamhocks that are tasty with greens It took me a while to make but the peach cobbler is left in the oven to bake The turkey is very tender I mixed the vegatables in the blender Thought you might like my well cooked dinner This will be a day you'll remember |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I enjoyed this piece much QL...  And a big Welcome to Passions!! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Quiet Lightning! When do we eat?! Delicious poem! Denise |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Great poem, if this was written for someone they should feel darn lucky!! The food, like the poem, sounds good!! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Jim Hastings Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 23Arizona |
Great poem, only thing is now I'm hungrey. When do we eat? It's fantasy. But if it contains a piece of me doesn't that make it as real as I am? |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Oh, this one got to me...a meal and not one I cook myself...please, please tell me you're cooking it for me?..*g* I love cheese and macaroni...not sure about the hemlocks though..ooops did you say hamhocks?...what are they? )Seriously, I just wanted to acknowledge the thoughts, little things mean a lot - to most of us... Hugs< !signature--> Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 12-27-1999).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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