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i need a poem

johncanica
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since 2002-10-21

Posts 2

0 posted 2002-10-21 03:08 PM

i need some1 who is good to write me a poem ive been friends withthis girl sabrina for 11 years and weve been really close friends 4 about 2 yrs and now i like her alot but she dosent really like me back and i wanted to give her a poem to explaing this she knows and like her and stuff but i would like a poem that represents whats going on any1 think they can write me one please???

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-10-21 03:51 PM

Hi John, and welcome to Passions in Poetry.

Because the Teen Poetry forum is supposed to be intended for only posts that actually are poetry, I'm going to transfer your post into a discussion forum, where I believe it will get a better response.

And on the topic of this poem you would like, I understand that you are probably not very confident about the quality of your own poetry, but have you considered asking someone for guidance on a poem that you've written, perhaps? Instead of getting someone to flat-out write the poem for you, you could probably post a poem in any of our forums (especially Critical Analysis), and expect people to really help you in giving it a more professional presentation.

I wish you the best of luck with this situation, and again, welcome to Passions! I really hope you give your own poetry a chance and try to learn as much as you can here.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

[This message has been edited by Local Parasite (10-21-2002 07:22 PM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-10-22 11:00 AM

Welcome. YOU are the only one who has the emotional 'rough draft' words for this, but many here will gladly help you 'polish' a poem. Post your thoughts in the forum, let your feelings flow from your heart. The fine tuning of your heart's song will come after the first notes hit the page.
Post it, and we will come, to help you in any way we can. WELCOME to this family of friends.

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