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tecoyah Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 83NY |
Crossed floor stampede of pain Bloodied toe shoots my nerves Damn toys left strewn like lovers clothes |
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Ramjam Junior Member
since 2003-11-23
Posts 21 |
the scene was nice but im not sure wht lovers clths have to do wit toys? |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
On the other hand, it seems perfectly clear to me. Nice simile, IMO. A little frivolity is always welcome here. Thanks. Pete |
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Ramjam Junior Member
since 2003-11-23
Posts 21 |
wuts a smilie? |
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tecoyah Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 83NY |
Ramjam....if you have kids, you will know exactly what I mean. The strewn clothes inevitably lead to the strewn toys. |
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