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wishes

MissMatylda
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since 2002-05-26

Posts 1

0 posted 2002-05-26 10:33 AM

wishes

at first I only wished that one day
I would be able to tell
how much you meant to me
and how good it was to be around you
and then I wished I’d say more
maybe something about stars and love
and maybe something passionate

then it was good to be together
I only wished it'd last forever
and I was sure we'd never part
and now.....

and now I only wish that one day
I will be able to tell
what your words meant to me
and wish I’ll never be around you

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-05-26 03:12 PM

MissMatylda~
I just wanted to welcome you to Passions~
I believe you are the first poet I've noticed on the membership from Poland~
WELCOME~

I'm not much of a 'critiquer' .. but when someone writes from their heart ... I enjoy reading it~

Hope we will see more from you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-05-26 08:34 PM

Let me be the second to Welcome You to Passions! We gather in folks from all around the World, and we are so glad to see that you have joined our marvelous little home of Poets...

This is a great start as your first poem in Passions! I am looking forward to many more!

Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03

Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA

3 posted 2002-05-28 11:52 AM

Hi MissMatylda,

I'm a little late but I will join Marge and Sunshine in welcoming you to the family. I don't think I have heard from Poland before either. If English is your second language I will say that you certainly seem to have a truly good understanding of it. This is very nice work.

I hope to see a lot more. Also, please do step right in and comment on other writers too.

Thanks,
Pete

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