Critical Analysis #2 |
Finish Line |
Marty Baird Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 90Georgia, U.S. |
Dawn broke on a warm summer's day. A group, small at first then growing in size gathered. People stretching and sprinting meeting friends old & new. A shot rang out, a race begins. The front off like rabbits the rest like snails waiting for time to fly. With every heel strike the starting line fades. Heat and time delete the ranks, muscles fill with toxin and pain. But pride gives way, taking us to another world. From out of a dream the finish line appears. If we can make it? Surging forward with energy unrealized we near that point. Others may have crossed an hour before. However in this one moment you're the first. Now the event is over,and thoses who gathered feel tomorrow will bring another race. |
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Marty Baird Member
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Posts 90Georgia, U.S. |
Understood |
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