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all kinds of creatures

colifer
Junior Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 37
Ohio

0 posted 2003-10-25 07:16 PM

look beyond the hills
all kinds of things come crawling
living...working
the aged and spawning.
beautiful, wonderful,
magical creatures.
Mysteriously boding,
with curious features.
All kinds of instincts,
survival and peace,
or slightly threatening,
ferocious beasts.
Animals with fur
and razor sharp claws
or hides with scales
and very strong jaws.
Now...to the stream
the creatures with fins
the vaders, the diles,
and the octopins.
Winter comes
snow covers grass,
water...ice,
a reflective glass.
All things living
all sizes and hue.
All things, beautiful,
look, even you.

merlynh
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 411
deer park, wa

1 posted 2003-11-01 05:39 AM

This reminds me to look, and like everyone else I sometimes forget look in ways that are not common. That's way I look at posts most don't becuase I learn what others don't see. It I read real close I see the words that mean something, because everyone has a message. What you wrote was cute.

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