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kadafi09
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since 2003-06-17
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0 posted 2003-08-21 11:25 AM


as i look through the empty halls, still thinkin' , in my car
ring ring ring, quiet y'all, incomin call
its about my ex girl from high school, happened to die
she's was gonna be a mother without a father, nobody cry
life with that playa, alcohol, domestic violence calls
she used to do them back in tha days, do you recall
while i raised tha g's
with tha benz, iced out, blaze tha speed
with tha sun roof, lets get smoked out, and blaze with me
two in tha mornin and i drive by, escalade, iced out
screamin, why did you die, until i passed out
but i know that you're gone, i'm in tha zone
thinkin i don't wanna die all alone
but now you're gone
and all i've got left is stinkin memories
i would of loved you till death, i'm drinkin henessey
i'm tryin to make it last, i wished death to tha playa when this passed
yet life goes on


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gringakiwi
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since 2003-08-05
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1 posted 2003-08-21 07:33 PM


Have you ever considered writing song lyrics/rap? I think your style would suit it well!
kadafi09
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2 posted 2003-08-21 08:02 PM


interesting idea. now the only thing left is for an opportunity from the music industry.

"The american dream wasn't meant for me, cause lady liberty's a hypocrite she lied to me, promised me freedom, education, and equality never gave me n

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