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JustALonelyBuni New Member
since 2003-08-19
Posts 3CT, US |
Nice Eyes Bent too close I kissed the flame Burnt myself Full of pain You shattered me And made me cry I told myself Another lie Forget the things I thought we shared What was nothing to you Is what made me care Those eyes you have Are made of glass They're used to fool Those in your grasp I let you in And you broke my heart I trusted you From the start The anger sets My heart aflame And you're the one I have to blame [This message has been edited by JustALonelyBuni (08-19-2003 11:16 AM).] |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Hi Lacey, Welcome to the forum. An interesting poem but you will have to fix that one word with the asterisks in it though. You only have one day to do it so please get on it. While you're at it, you should check the guidelines for our forums to avoid such problems in the future. Pete |
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