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rose Member
since 2003-08-02
Posts 53 |
Trembling A scrap of tissue paper, soft and red with edges, torn, that blur into the very air, spins a silent song as the wind holds it in her palm carries it far along on her chilly breath— The paper is not only singing now, but dancing, too— It will fly to the clouds, but they will consume it! eat it, drink its color. I cannot bear to witness its demise. |
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mircasaster New Member
since 2003-08-08
Posts 9TN, United States |
Hello, Rose, I hope that you are doing well today. I believe that this is a very imaginative poem. The expression of emotion is very good throughout the entire poem, and it flows in fluid movement throughout the poem as well. Thank you for posting this poem, I thought it was very well written. |
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j0n4th4n Member
since 2003-03-11
Posts 94 |
this is lovely.. i love the detail and that line especially about the edges blurring into the very air. what is the significance of the tissue paper? i'm curious to know. can i ask, how do you do those long lines at the end of a word? |
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rose Member
since 2003-08-02
Posts 53 |
thanks for your replies, guys the significance of the tissue paper is actually a friendship of mine that was wobbling uncertainly... to do the long lines at the end of the word, hit the dash key (upper right-hand corner of keyboard) twice and hit enter or simply continue typing and it should automatically make the long line. i think. again, thanks for taking the time to reply. ~rose |
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