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warmhrt
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0 posted 2003-07-28 01:15 PM


Pimk lemonade afternoon,
Sitting under blue and white
striped umbrella,
Sultry summer breezes dance
through hair,
tall flowers in the garden;
Blossoms move to it's beat,
leaves rustle to it's song;
Sprinklers rain cascades
onto grass,
children's shriek's, their sweet
laughter follow sprints beneath
moving waterfalls;
Biker's cruise the roads,
convertibles put their tops down
to catch the wind,
cyclists whiz by, wheels spinning;
Sipping lemonade in the shade,
watching the late July world go by,
relaxing, taking it all in,
wondering why that guy is running
in the hot, blazing sun, shirt
soaked with sweat,
looks like he's gonna die,
that can't be good for his health,
oh, no, - me, sipping lemonade in the shade,
now that's cool.

"It is wisdom to know others;
It is enlightenment to know one's self" - Lao Tzu

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