Critical Analysis #2 |
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1,855 Days |
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since 2003-06-17
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1,855 Days 5/24/03 From behind the cracked window --the pane obscured by ceaseless steam, I watch helplessly as angels earn their golden wings. My mortal arms strike the glass, yearning to be feather-light. Yawning knees buckle from standing still while newborns shove me out of line. I stood first at the gate, but they bring the key, paying pity to their elder as they pass me by. Centuries soar as I patiently wait, My tired feet firmly planted in place Yet I begin to question whether I’ve stood in vain, As I grow weary from the wanting. ---------------------------------------------------- I'm interested to see if you can figure this out without me giving an obvious description...and also, how you interpret this on your own. ![]() Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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