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Critical Analysis #2

Let Go And Let Love

LilElmo
New Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 5
illinois

0 posted 2003-07-11 11:47 PM

Let Go And Let Love

You standing there
Looking the way you do
Staring into your eyes
I know there's something more to you
You won't let your feelings
Come out to be seen
So when going by your gestures
You seem kinda mean
You've been hurt by someone
And now you don't wanna feel
But there's someone else out there for you
And her love for you will be real
Don't be scared
To open your heart
Let yourself love her
And it won't fall apart
Open your eyes
Open them wide
Who knows this girl
Could one day be your bride
She wants to love you
So let it come true
She doesn't want your money
She just wants you
You both have problems
You can work them out together
Through good and bad days
Through sund and stormy weather
So don't let your heart worry
About getting hurt
Let that be your past
And bury it in the dirt
Let go and let love
Let all your dreams come true
It could just so be
That she is the one for you
By: Tomeka

kadafi09
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 143
California, United States

1 posted 2003-07-12 12:08 PM

your poem made me think, think of all the girls i've been with.

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