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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Marching forward Perfect synchrony Laying down Into their cribs Heads held strongly Upon exposed ribs Antithesis of rebirth Perfect copies of Plastic mirth (chorus) Put on your best shoes Expose your weakness “Go break a leg” “Go break a leg” You’re what we told you to be You’re what we want Standing strongly Perfect harmony Reaching out With your lips Wrap your pain Around those hips Antithesis of rebirth Perfect copies of Plastic mirth (chorus) Beauty always dances With the beast Lift heads up high So they can feast Makeup always covers Up the lies (chorus) Your life is just a reject Of acceptance Must be brighter than the rest The models Must be better than the best The models Must look newer than the old The models (chorus) The models Lift that chin up high Wipe the vomit From your eye The models Marching forward Perfect synchrony Laying down Into their cribs Heads held strongly Upon exposed ribs (chorus) Point to runway number five It’s the ticket to demise Point to runway number six Degradation by the pricks Point to runway number nine Spotlights out you had your time (chorus) Walking out Perfect nothings Hating life Their hollow mod Down on knees Hail the fashion god The models Lift that chin up high Wipe the vomit From your eye The models The models |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
Very interesting poem you got here, Mad_Hatter! I like the lines: "Reaching out With your lips Wrap your pain Around those hips" The line: "Wipe the vomit / From your eye" really drives your point home. Good poem  Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Thank you for the feedback. This whole poem was an attempt to make a point and I just hope I drove the point through hard enough. Thanks again for the feedback. |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
Well, no doubt about it, your point is definitely made with this poem. Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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