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Critical Analysis #2

Love Until Tomorrow.

bgryan
Junior Member

since 2003-06-16

Posts 30
North Ireland

0 posted 2003-06-27 09:52 AM

If I were to leave tomorrow
would you come and search for me?
If I cried on your shoulder
would you comfort me?

If all my dreams were shattered
and life's hope had faded away
would you give me your strength
for my weakness,
would you love me another day?

Our time together is like the shadows
that fall with the evening sun,
and though we have all these treasures
would you still love me,
if we had none?

The breeze is gently blowing
across an ocean of tears
will our love last
until tomorrow,
or for a thousand years?

kadafi09
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 143
California, United States

1 posted 2003-07-06 08:08 PM

it's cool. nice flow.

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

2 posted 2003-11-29 09:04 PM

I like this, there's that song - if I leave here tomorrow would you still remember me?

Haunting thought.

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