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A friend in Mike |
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Cytten Junior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 16Canada |
Should I show him what I feal should I let him see my hurt, pain and suffering let him into my stolen heart love from a stolen heart guilt buiding up inside of me trying to get throught to me why...why...why stealing is wrong I am bad.. stealing a heart from some one I love stealing him from her is bad why..why..why.. I did it anyay..... he is mine and I am his she alone is crying...crying over him hating me...killing my memory in her heart wanting me but not suffering now she tells me to go piss off and leave her alone missing me like nothner loving the one she hates |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
As an amatuer writer, when I was new on pip, I also tried to post here.I liked this, but it needed much work. p.s I still need much work Jason [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (06-16-2003 01:13 PM).] |
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