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anger...as if never presented.
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anger...as if never presented. |
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raevynsbreath Member
since 2003-06-06
Posts 64Mi, USA |
stare a little bit harder your mother never taught you better you'll bite your tongue now as never before i'll slam your face into a ground filled with the insides of your evil you'll die a harder death than the night before this, my dear, is all for you take your rape-free, anal retentive minds and get the hell out this world won't do you any good it fills your body with despair (as though the happiness were never there) sink into the blood-red sky and wave your dreams away your questions are all you have left (and even you can't answer them now) note: i write with a lot of symbolism.i realize this.but i'm open to what you have to say.so talk away. _rae |
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V. Tomir Junior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 20 |
Mrs. Raevynsbreath If you are open to what we have to say then you will love this post. You DO NOT write with a lot of symbolism. However you DO write with a lot of cliches and pummel the reader with a constant barrage of vague descriptions. Please turn off the MTV and pick up a book or two of poetry. And if you do take the time to read some poetry you will begin to notice a definite pattern when comparing books. A large majority of decent poets will at least make an effort to be original. Regards. |
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