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Critical Analysis #2

Chaos

dreadfulhate22
New Member

since 2003-05-04

Posts 3

0 posted 2003-05-04 09:45 PM

The insanity is just to much

hidden feelings unable to touch

i cry and cry but the tears are dry

and from the pain i wanna die

the bitterness is what makes me whole

as the hatred eats away my soul

and when death finnaly surrounds me

you will see how it will be

and darkness will come into the light

as day will come into the night

the suffering is long past due

as it coldy wiats for you

and finnaly at the wake of dawn

all the chaos is done and gone.

Not A Poet
Member Elite

since 1999-11-03

Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA

1 posted 2003-05-05 02:09 PM

Hello 22,

and welcome to the CA forum. It's good to hear a new voice. Please check our guidelines and join in the discussions of poetry.

Pete

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