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Doer of Good Word

Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

0 posted 2003-04-23 12:00 PM

Doer of Good Word

Sweet poemwright, doer of good word
truthward in deed, mindworthy herd
of vers thou art most wonder made
right for making, bright for thy trade;
a loreknight of the round world pight
learner and nurse of love aright
sworded with feather weild thy quest
and light that volume of man's breast
with tune of truth his world shall hear
in every inch of its ear!
This age is a madding array;
be daunted not to sing and say-
City sons need respite from din
So dreamer, wake the harp within.
No eyne are more sure gems godkind
than thine that make a poet's mind!
It's nobled halls, it's history;
Each fire faring meal and degree.
Doer of good word, thou art heard
in poetic plumage, a bird
farer of skies, bearer of song
in natures court reporting strong.

[This message has been edited by Essorant (04-23-2003 12:36 PM).]

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2003-04-24 05:03 AM

First thing Ess, before I say anything about your poem, I have a question.

Why the style? Why the thous and the arts and so on?

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