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WHERE I BELONG
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WHERE I BELONG |
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
WHERE I BELONG I burn with desire, As i cling to the brink of my sanity, hopeful,useless, to fight what's meant to be, A restless,lovely calamity, Is this how love's suposed to be? Standing on the edge of my destiny, Your love constantly arresting me, Forever bound to a painful pleasure i can't rise above, Do i give into this imprisonment or say goodbye, my love? So hateful,so sweet,so hurtful, so much in love, This is the misery,the ectasy i can't rise above, My defenses weak,my love is strong, A ruthless,amazing love i loved so long, Maybe i should just stay where i know i belong. |
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Seth Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 74Arizona |
I am Seth, hi. I am new here but I thought I'd post a reply regardless. I noticed your use of caps, were you trying to make a statement about how this relationship makes you feel? If so I found it an interesting way of making a point. The poem seems to be trying to reach some kind of climax that builds as you read on. I am not yet what I would consider adept, so I shall leave the higher critisism to the experts.  I enjoyed it very much thoughas we've all had those "screwed if you do or don't" relationships. Seth |
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
thanks for the reply seth! and welcom to passions! ive only been a member for a short time too..but so far i love this site! yeah thats exactly what this poem is about(not me persay) the person is screwed if he/she leaves screwed if he/she stays. thanks again for the reply seth! |
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maverick55 Junior Member
since 2003-04-14
Posts 36Texas |
Very interesting insight and expression of feelings. It is clear. The understanding of the turmoil is impressive. (take the leap!) |
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