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Critical Analysis #2

Color blind

StevenZimmerman
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since 2003-03-06

Posts 2
In the skies above, in the dirt below

0 posted 2003-03-07 04:12 PM

As a young man coming into my own
my perceptions in life have been worn and tattered
along this journey to becoming grown

All my life i was taught
from my decisions in life
my fate would be wrought

I spoke what I thought
and what I believed in
for that I fought

Now Im here, tried
for a crime I didnt commit
they wont believe I didnt do it

The black and white in which I viewed the world
hid the truth from my eyes
hid the world of chaos, hatred, and lies

A loud crash resounded through my home
the veil of clarity shattered
leaving me hounded, bruised and battered
alone

In the recesses of my mind
a voice screams, "its about time"
all my life I have been color blind

Not A Poet
Member Elite

since 1999-11-03

Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA

1 posted 2003-03-07 08:07 PM

Hi Steve,

And welcome to the forum. Check your email for a special message.

Pete

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