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Poem for a former friend
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Poem for a former friend |
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Poetic_angel Junior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 10 |
I'm just a follower I could never come in first You think it's funny I think it is the worst You think I am stupid I can't do anything right You make me feel horrible I cry every night I wish I was better So you wouldn't be mad I wish you weren't mean So I wouldn't be sad You judge me so quickly You give me commands If I didn't follow You grab me by the hands Why are you like this? You used to be kind I guess you lost your kindness Somewhere in your mind Or maybe you are saving Your kindness and glee For somebody special Someone better than me. |
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Poetic_angel Junior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 10 |
Okay on the fourth stanza third line I made a typo...It is supposed to say "don't"not "didn't" sorry about this |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
You can still correct your typo. You have a day to make any corrections or changes. Click the little Edit icon above the poem. If you hold the mouse over an icon for a second or two, a hint as to its purpose will appear. That's how you can find the right one if you don't already know. Then when the poem textcomes up in a new window, just make any necessary changes and be sure to click the Submit button again. Pete |
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