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Art's Best Season (Ammended!)
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Art's Best Season (Ammended!) |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Art's Best Season Pleasure and reason Make art's best season- A crown between; A golden mean. Play it as harp Wield it on sharp! And think and ease To rightly please O lifty muse All whom peruse! Stir me, store me In poetry A garland gold Of words enrolled With truth and taste Perfectly placed- Sublimebound pight volumes of light. A choice charming for badazzling! What is a dream Without a deem? What is insight Without delight? Make love with lore And lore with love So art can soar To grace above! |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Welcome back Essorant. Why don't you try commenting a little on other members' work? So far, you have 33 entries in this forum, only 4 of which are comments on someone else's poetry. Of course that is not a requirement but it does seem to help bring more comments to your own. Sharing of comments and observations is what makes the forum work. Pete |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
I don't have a critic's license. |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Hey, sure you do. You have as much license as anyone here anyway. Besides, I have seen enough of your work and your insights, particularly in Philosophy, to know that you are capable of a pretty significant and valuable contribution to CA. Just come on and join in on the fun. We really are pretty easy going, well, most of the time anyway. Pete |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
no we're not - we're just mean and nasty heh... Ess - I agree with Pete...join in, critique away - not enough do..  K |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
Well, some things have changed, haven't they? |
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chopsticks Senior Member
since 2007-10-02
Posts 888The US, |
“ Well, some things have changed, haven't they?” This is so funny. I thought the medication from the war was starting to kick in. Then I realized that all the date lines except Brad’s were from 03. In fact I was typing the mother of all post when I decided to take another look. Btw, have you ever ask anybody not to critique, well if I live long enough . |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
"All whom peruse" I would never use "whom" incorrectly like this now a days. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful poem and how interestingly rhymed among short verses. what is the form? Even Sir Essorant wrote a free-verse.  |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Thanks Tom. Although me is loth to call it "free verse". |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
why? tell me the style, dear Sir Essorant? |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Stilus optimus |
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oceanvu2 Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066Santa Monica, California, USA |
Hi Ess: Style is the man! You the man, Ess, in this style, which seems to be uniquely your own. This is not a bad thing, and it works very well here. Best, Jim |
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