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Critical Analysis #2
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arthur
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since 2001-08-14
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0 posted 2002-12-07 02:47 PM


Charity

A child is lost,and full of fear.
He crys to God:draw near,draw near!
But God is deaf,He will not hear.

If you seek mercy,give the same.
Hold the child:sooth his pain.
Reach out now, and dry the tear.

arthur
comments welcome
particulary ref structure
does anyone have a name for this sort of ryhme(?sp)
i e 2 last lines
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