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Critical Analysis #2

Statues

Essorant
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since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

0 posted 2002-12-02 08:15 PM

So seldom are still statues kissed
For lips dislike skin cold as steel
Though many are where patience' fist
Has petrifed man whom would feel!
Again life, love and morning shine
And turn to might with passions spine
To break that mould with his own flesh
And start a brave new love afresh,
Blessed forth with motion growing bold
mid soul as bright as day is gold.

Thus could one kiss truly create,
What seems but stone, may truly wait.

[This message has been edited by Essorant (12-03-2002 02:52 AM).]

just dreaming
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 8

1 posted 2002-12-03 10:06 AM

Beautiful poem..Great job!

Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

2 posted 2002-12-03 05:19 PM

Thank you Just Dreaming. I'm glad you enjoyed.

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