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If not for the saddness in your eyes
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If not for the saddness in your eyes |
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Epicrean Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 16 |
If not for the saddness in your eyes Or your weeping care woven heart's sigh These endless sorrows should never subside In these passings apart We so long only for a kiss (from the heart) Or simply still every single whisper missed But in our soul's deepest part There we may find each Together in the poet's choatic peace Languidly there we shall happily stray Past saddness's tainted streams Of another lost lover's hopeless whims To never say "sweet good-bye" Rooted deeper in us still The vows of our love ever instilled Through the coldest miles afar And in bleakest dismay's shower fall Ever together are true hearts, apart Epicrean |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
sometimes its hard to find words to comment. you took me to a moment, with one line in particular,"Together in the poet's choatic peace, Languidly there we shall happily stray, Past saddness's tainted streams," And how perfect your ending:"Ever together are true hearts, apart." lots of love, gemma xxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Epicrean Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 16 |
thank you so much, that is a great review of my poem. I am so happy you liked it EPiC |
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