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Critical Analysis #2
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Monk Frost I!
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since 2008-06-15
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0 posted 2009-03-12 01:48 AM

Perfect a rose
From the stem of thorn
Precious the scent
From petals that adorn


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turtle
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1 posted 2009-03-12 01:54 AM

These last 2 are a little better monk

Still some minor errors, but making a lot more sense.
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