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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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0 posted 2009-02-24 06:10 AM



To Margherita, birthday poem
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I brought a birthday bird.
Though birthday means
changing one cage for another;
I brought the bird to be freed
forever.
And God was meant to bless her
for this act of kindeness.
“So where is it?” she asked me.
I opened my heart.
She could hear the batting wings.
=© 2009 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar

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© Copyright 2009 poddar kushal - All Rights Reserved
turtle
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since 2009-01-23
Posts 548
Harbor
1 posted 2009-02-24 05:43 PM


Hi poddarku,


I'm a little confused here. Are you posting this in CA for Margherita to find, or are you looking for
critiques?


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