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A Poem With a Secret
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A Poem With a Secret |
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shades_of_green New Member
since 2008-12-17
Posts 8 |
Here, Elsewhere, Liking Little Observations Every Variety, Every Realization. Yelled, Bequeathed, Or Declared, Yes! I Ask My Neighbors, Enemies, Whomever Could One Man Mention, Even Notice This Subtlety? Hint: In the beginnings the secret is hidden I hope that this prose will be answered with grinning! |
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chopsticks Senior Member
since 2007-10-02
Posts 888The US, |
Hi Bro. Green, it’s difficult to get prose critiqued at CA. I know I’ve posted quite a few. But while I’m here I’ll take a guess, it's that kid Bones from Philly ? |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
Thankfully you weren't in charge of espionage in the war. Not exactly the Enigma Code is it,  Welcome anyway, and what did you want the comments on? How about a poem? |
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shades_of_green New Member
since 2008-12-17
Posts 8 |
I posted another one earlier. It's very close to this one on the forum. |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
So you did, I'm both sorry and half blind obviously.  |
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