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dfcwer New Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 2 |
What is the true essence of perfection? Does it truly exist in this world of yours? Are you perfect I ask? I would like to believe so Alas it’s not true For no man, woman nor child can be perfect For life is not that sweet to reward the gift of perfection Nor so bitter to deprive of achieving this feet Yet with this said many fools Choose not to head this warning For perfection in their eyes is not so hard to achieve I too am a fool for i have found perfection So with this said perfection is too great of feet Yet in my eyes I have been blessed In a form of a angel My angel only, my love CBW |
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shades_of_green New Member
since 2008-12-17
Posts 8 |
I could really relate to this poem, as I have often pondered the meaning of perfection myself (as most of us have). I think you grounded an amorphous idea well. |
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