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Critical Analysis #2
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geenabee
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since 2002-09-10
Posts 59
NC--USA
0 posted 2002-09-16 03:47 PM

Perfect, what does perfect bring?
Silent awe of a living thing?
Less than sterling fits the mold.
Beating heart to granite's cold.

Though sculpted hearts may lack the flaws,
their icy souls will never thaw.


written in 1990 when I was in 10th grade
still one of my favorite poems I've ever written, and the only one I have ever memorized!

ha ha
gb
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Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648
1 posted 2002-09-16 09:26 PM

How very true.
Beautifully expressed too!
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