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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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A time to build He looks at it, the residue, the left over. He has to try. It is nature. The way he can fly, the way he knows it is the season to find love, he has to try. Try to build. His little nest. The female one is too withdrawn. Still her eyes are transfixed on the broken shells, half eaten eggs and bits of their nest. The male bird is looking for a safer place, if there is one ever. New nest. A cruel yet neutral sun is watching them. Snakes may return but the life must go on. clever talks delay friendship! |
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RC Langill Member
since 2008-03-09
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quote: Your words reveal an unstinting harshness, but show how, whether from hope or desperation, we still press on. I can't call this a nice write, but it is done well. |
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