Critical Analysis #2 |
Mister Guru |
chopsticks Senior Member
since 2007-10-02
Posts 888The US, |
With my bad grammar I fell over board I ask for some help, they threw me a sword. Go plough some new ground at some other place, your kind of writing is really off base, I'll sink to my death in this sea of blue. So please mister. Guru show me how- to, write some poetry that’s honest and true, I’ll be attentive and listen to you. I’ll cut you in when I sale my stuff. So teach me real good and all up to snuff. Please mister guru hurry on down, teach the rudiments to this village clown I'll not write a sonnet, won't start a fight. I've looked down the tunnel, I see the light . [This message has been edited by chopsticks (09-09-2008 09:13 AM).] |
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