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Nukes and sugar brown
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cauchy3 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 61 |
Nukes and sugars brown¡K All regrets are china all. Eat the rice and feel with spoons. Get my checks in Milk-IE ways. Get as powers onto man. Hooch with under pants are booty. Fast to react are breeder chains. Under guards are safety words. Nukes are nudes to touch by feeling. Taiwan May-may nude are galleries.¡¦ Heroine catty cats are Taiwan May-may. Simple fees are Taiwan free.¡¦ Supply Taiwan full with Cartel goods. We are need for wands. Nude to nukes are May-may dance. Cauchy3 will dance the reels as bogies Taiwan kissing. Nukes to deal are kiss to doings. Mr. Cartel gets in string. Please will you? Get me sugar brown. -----------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3----------- . |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
I find many of your poems impenetrable and this one seems to follow the same path. However, I do see a successful current of underworld Taiwan and wondered if you'd spend a little more time on it. It was coherent enough to keep me interested. |
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