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Critical Analysis #2
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Bill Shirnberg
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since 2007-10-28
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0 posted 2008-03-22 03:45 AM


I’LL SWIM TO THE MOON

AND SLEEP ASSURED

TO RIDE THE DAY

IN SWIFT AZURE
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A.Grace
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since 2008-03-02
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1 posted 2008-03-22 11:00 AM

I’LL SWIM TO THE MOON
AND SLEEP ASSURED
TO RIDE THE DAY
IN SWIFT AZURE

Short and sweet to be sure.  This would be exactly what an astronaut would feel, except it would be more dark than azure.  Or a surfer riding the waves.  Maybe this is an odyssey in one's own mind, hence the title "Spirit Tide" perhaps?

Thanks for sharing.
A.
Bill Shirnberg
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2 posted 2008-03-22 01:22 PM

ACTUALLY ITS A POEM I WROTE AFTER WATCHING THAT PINK FLOYD SONG "LEARNING TO FLY"

WHICH I HAVE ARROGANTLY RE TITLED AS I DO THINGS LIKE THAT IN THE MANIC PHASE OF THE MOON

I CALL THE SONG

DREAMS REAP THE GHOST

A NIGHT AND DAY IN THE LIFE OF SKY SPIRIT MAN
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