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Falling Away..... [temptation is taking over]
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Falling Away..... [temptation is taking over] |
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SecretTemptation New Member
since 2007-11-23
Posts 8US |
I wrote this a few months ago, when temptation seemed to take over... like it? any suggestions? _______________________________________________ I wish i had a way... To not fall astray -- From the things i know are right... I know someday i might... Is it important enought to me? To keep my virginity? So i wont have to sigh... When he askes me if im high... Holding a baby in one hand, This isnt what i planned... He told me its harder than it seems... The decisions dont have to be extreams... To mess up all your hopes and dreams... I B l e e d W o r d s -- |
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chopsticks Senior Member
since 2007-10-02
Posts 888The US, |
Temptation , will most likely haunt you the rest of your life. Losing your virginity is surrendering to the second strongest human emotion and not always a pretty sight. This is just my opinion, as I have not been sworn in as an expert, the poems has way to many ellipsis. |
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