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Critical Analysis #2
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Bill Shirnberg
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since 2007-10-28
Posts 50
USA AOK
0 posted 2007-11-01 09:47 PM


Some thoughts may wander
in the pale unknown
but most can find
their own way home


"check please"
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Brad
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea
1 posted 2007-11-01 10:58 PM

I very much enjoyed this.

I especially liked the double play with 'check please" -- I do hope that was intended.

If it wasn't, don't tell anyone.


lyricpoet
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since 2005-07-16
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2 posted 2007-11-03 09:15 AM

This was well done, much enjoyed!!
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