»
Archives
»
Critical Analysis #2
»
Winter Hiatus
| Critical Analysis #2 |
|
Winter Hiatus |
|
|
Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Sad like A drip of wine, Bending with its bloody drop, Pirouetting with His loosely fit tie. A winter stage, Curled above His brown, laced boots, Sat his black, cashmere scarf. The signs of green That watched each corner, Lay it’s white eyes upon His thick, raspy, skin. His knuckles seamed together, With freckles of hair That spun its roots Into the frosty air That pasted the window stores. Dicing his way Through each corner, He spotted the wooden bench He grew ever so fond of. Like a woven quilt, Stitched with hands of silk, He sat with his back To the peoples stares, As he stray The air with blue hues, His vision caught fire Among the icy loom. |
||
| © Copyright 2007 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
This might be fun but I'd break it loose a bit. Instead of the snapshot approach try something along the lines of a camcorder. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
