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Critical Analysis #2
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purplecrush
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since 2007-05-25
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0 posted 2007-05-25 11:17 AM


“Turbid Sunset”

Into this world I wander,
Lost and derelict.
Earnestly hoping to endeavor in finding,
that which this world will not depict.

Into the night I wander;
Blind and unknown truths,
Wrestle them among me,
Forcing me uncouth.

Into the sunrise I wander;
Visions of grandure appeal
As a tree grows towards the sun
Hope life does thus deal

Into this day I wander,
Night grasps it indeed a quick reprieve.
I stand tall only to fall,
Upon the darklight eve,

Into this sunset I wander,
so difficult to see,
With the waters so turbid,
What life must be.


T.S.
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purplecrush
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1 posted 2007-05-30 12:10 PM

Please someone tell me what you think!
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