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What lies beneath |
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rockbabe Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105 |
The day he walked in, Tall and rugged From a place unknown Overwhelmed with emotion, She felt her heart beat No words were exchanged But only a dialogue led by enthralled eyes Captured by his web Promises made Walls broken down………… Secretly, A mind filled with Deceit. |
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oceanvu2 Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066Santa Monica, California, USA |
Hi Rockbabe: I've noticed that no one else has picked up on this poem, possibly because it presents enormous difficulties for reasonable critique. I'd just let this one go and move along. The earnestness and honesty is clear. Best, Jim |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
I like it, it has a dangerous feel to it.Very captivating. |
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