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After the Thundershower
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After the Thundershower |
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Aurelian Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 109TX, USA 
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It wrung out the skydew dry The spawn of the lightwarmed sky Sopping with torrid and fast beaming ray Sputters of wind-worn fog Gathered from airy bog Dripping from sea-wet and tree-wet array Gold-spire of blue-wall height Tyrant of summerlight Blotted by thick-spinning drift of decay Swelling the cockle-seed Waking the thistle-weed Rousing with dampness from torpid delay Swelling the shatterpod Springing the goldenrod Sprung from a drifting wisp spun far away The green-gold, the gray-blue, in rampant display |
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minus Member
since 2007-03-24
Posts 75 |
it had me until the last four or five lines...there was a catch in the rhyme or something. swelling the shatterpod springing the goldenrod it bumped me off there...i was amazed i was handling the rhyme-changes so long, though. good job. |
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