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oceanvu2
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0 posted 2007-03-27 05:24 PM


These lines were inadvertantly stolen from a memory of Denise Levortov.  My most sincere apologies.

[This message has been edited by oceanvu2 (03-27-2007 10:34 PM).]

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Aurelian
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1 posted 2007-03-27 10:14 PM


Isn't that an indirect quote from a poem by Levertov? http://www.cs.rice.edu/~ssiyer/minstrels/poems/201.html
oceanvu2
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2 posted 2007-03-27 10:28 PM


By God, it is!  I haven't read Denise Levortov in years, but clearly, there was a direct brain impression made at the time.  Absolutely "stolen lines."  Mea culpa, mea culpa, even if it was inadvertant.  I will immediately "edit" my post to eliminate the poem.  

Always wonderful to encounter someone who reads and remembers.

Jim

minus
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3 posted 2007-03-28 01:06 AM


...and levertov!  i must find more levertov...

aurelian got you, man!

oceanvu2
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4 posted 2007-03-29 07:01 PM


Hi minus!  Aurelian in one of the best poets posting on this forum.  Read the work she puts up.  

Didn't mean to "steal" the lines, but it is an interesting side note on how poetry and poetic images do have a lasting impact.

These deleted line were of an image from Levertov that stuck to my brain for like, 30 years.  If the posting led you to her work, this is a good, if regrettably sleazy, thing.

Jim  

Aurelian
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5 posted 2007-03-29 07:22 PM


Ahem... I am not a she. lol.
oceanvu2
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6 posted 2007-03-29 07:45 PM


Oops, sorry about the gender confusion on my part. Don't know where that came from.

My heart's in the right place, even if my brain switches off occasionaly.

Jim

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