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Triolet
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Triolet |
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Aurelian Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 109TX, USA 
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Fools are blind and they see not That blind they are and fools as well They tumble blindly into hell Fools are blind and they see not They keep their head within a pot And think the view inside is swell Fools are blind and they see not That blind they are and fools as well |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Nicely done. There are some really good points that could be pointed out here. As an experiment, let's see if anyone finds them. Aren't these little things fun? Pete |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
I don't get the title |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
The poem is a triolet, a very specific form, which it matches perfectly. See http://www.poeticbyway.com/gl-t.html and scroll down to Triolet. |
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oceanvu2 Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066Santa Monica, California, USA |
Absolutely delightful. I've been reading and commenting on your work today -- for whatever that's worth -- and I'm just flat tickled. The individual pieces are fine, but the fact that you maintain a very high quality throughout a body of work is most impressive! Do a chapbook if you haven't done one. I'll sign up for five to pass around. Best, Jim |
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