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Critical Analysis #2

Rebirth of the lost

Master666
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since 2006-10-02

Posts 3

0 posted 2006-10-02 04:08 PM

ChristianSpeaks
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since 2006-05-18

Posts 396
Iowa, USA

1 posted 2006-10-02 04:09 PM

You format must be weird

No nothing!!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2006-10-02 04:45 PM

Just a comment after reading all three of your postings. I think words alone can give the picture...instead of trying to have a picture as the background taking away the ease of reading...just the opinion of one who would rather find the image formed in my own mind than this way.

I will let the others who are more adept at poetry, give you some suggestions.
M

ChristianSpeaks
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since 2006-05-18

Posts 396
Iowa, USA

3 posted 2006-10-02 04:58 PM

Yeah man -

Just copy and paste - we can create the images with the words you give us.

CS

Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03

Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA

4 posted 2006-10-02 05:49 PM

This one has at least some small poetic value but I think we are all getting tired of your graphics. Please quit wasting our time and space!

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