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Kirk T Walker Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 357Liberty, MO |
Marriage by Kirk T Walker In our meeting, I found my own true love. But, ah hah! What is this? In marriage, it seems, I’ve found so much more. Indeed--my nemesis! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Kirk, clever one. The only suggestion I have is maybe if maybe if the poem was a rhyming piece. A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world.oscar wilde |
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Kirk T Walker Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 357Liberty, MO |
Brian: Isn't it a rhyming piece? (2nd and 4th:"this" and "-sis") Did you mean if it was NOT a rhyming piece? |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Kirk, I agree, very clever indeed...how true, well...you are just joking, I am sure. Have you shown this to your "nemesis"? Kris "It is wisdom to know others; |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Oh come on now Kris. Kirk is smarter than that  Pete |
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Kirk T Walker Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 357Liberty, MO |
This is not meant in offense to my wife, of course. Rather, it is meant to concentrate on a single aspect of marriage. Or perhaps to contrast two aspects? [This message has been edited by Kirk T Walker (08-09-2002 05:37 PM).] |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
Enjoyed this, Kirk. As they say ... once you go down on one knee, you never get up.  Jim |
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